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Monday, March 19, 2007

Risk

I want to write a bout my risky situation in my life. I went to haj 4 years ago with my brother and his friend. After two days from the EID began. It is the final day to do tawaf AL wada3 to complete all my haj structure. At that time when we went to do AL tawaf it was my friends and me in the first around from 7Th around and in the 3rd around I loosed my self between thousand people then I can listened a loud vioes saying Ali "where are you?" and I say to that voice I'm here with a long breathing and I can't moved from my place because I was hanging between many people then I tried to go out of this around number 5Th then I can do the last tow around later because I want to find my friend but I didn't found him because there was many people so I talked with a police man of Saudi Arabia police so I tell him what happen to me and help me arrive to hotel with another people from Egypt then I'm in hotel and the way back to U.A.E.

1 Comments:

At 12:32 AM, Blogger Ms. Eileen said...

Wow. I think you were wise in what you did. I think Haj must be one of the most crowded places in the world. You're lucky you solved your problem!

Please go back into this blog and check two things:
1) Your past tense. You use a lot very well, but you forgot some. Especially look at "can".
2) You need to put in some full stops to make your story easier to understand. You only have two full stops. You might have written the world's longest sentence!

 

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